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EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
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KODAK EASYSHARE C813 ZOOM DIGITAL CAMERA
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1/24 second
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F/2.7
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Oct 30, 2010, 3:23:56 PM
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KODAK EASYSHARE C813 ZOOM DIGITAL CAMERA
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Floopy bored by floopyrocks Floopy bored by floopyrocks
This is Floopy bored. (this is the one i want u to crituqe D9!)
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Feline-Basilisk Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oka doke:

I really like the concept of this one. I feel like this almost all the time! :lmao:
I like how you added blush to her cheeks and how she leans on her arm. Most of your mistakes would have to be in the proportions and anatomy. I myself am not exactly the best at proportions and anatomy, but I can see a few things that you could fix in the future.

Mainly, the cheeks should flow into/overlap the actual eyes a bit more, and your should watch out where you attach your arms. Try drawing out a horizontal line both at the top and bottom of the shoulders and try keeping the base of the arm in there. :aww:

Also, the paper looks as though its on the other side of a wall, try making the two corners closer to the viewer farther apart from the ones farther away.

Over all, I'd say that this is a very adorable style and idea. I love it. :heart:
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floopyrocks Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010  Student Artist
AWWW! :hug: :huggle: :heart: thank u! :thanks:
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Feline-Basilisk Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*Farther apart than the ones farther away.
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